cervical spondylosis वाक्य

Many of the treatments for cervical spondylosis have not been subjected to rigorous, controlled trials.
Surgical indications for cervical spondylosis with myelopathy ( CSM ) remain somewhat controversial, but " most clinicians recommend operative therapy over conservative therapy for moderate-to-severe myelopathy . " ( Baron, M . E .)
A copyeditor would probably catch and fix small errors like the extra space between the fourth and fifth paragraphs of the lead and the sentences like " Another claim stated that cervical spondylosis which is the wear and tear of the cartilage and bones of the neck " ( in the " Causes " section ), which is not a complete sentence.